The Lapse
The Lapse
Phone rings
Rubber screams
Loud CRASH
Metal screeches
One lapse
Three lives
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And all it takes is a split second to lose concentration.
And yet you still see people talking on their phones while driving!
A split second of stupidity.
Good one adee, as always.
Thank you Cindy.
LOL…powerful and oh so very true!! Good one!!! Hugs xx
Thanks Amanda. xxx
thansk for the brithday wishes…so vivid your verse in only a few lines…i have been in a few crashes…got my heart pumping…hope all are well…
Hope you had a wonderful day! Verse was a warning of how easily accidents can happen when we are distracted… Take care…
What did we all do before these phones were available? lol
I know! I often wonder what my mom and dad would think of all the technology we have now!
…I have something I need to post…..the same experience……your word usage here is great…..although it portrays a sad situation…
Very sad, Stilekke. I wrote it as I still see such dreadful thoughtlessness around, eg little kids standing on the front passenger seat and, of course, people talking and texting on phones while driving.
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Happy Tuesday!
Thank you Jingle and for all your fantastic organisational skills – wonderful!
nice flow of words.
Thanks Ji!