SUNSET

Sidey’s Weekend Theme: 19.08.2011 – Sunset

http://viewfromtheside.wordpress.com/2011/08/19/weekend-theme-34/

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Sunset

SUNSET

Darkness cloaks the earth
Silhouetted ‘gainst fire in the sky
Reaching, stretching way up high
Streaks of orange, red and yellow
Stunning pyrotechnic show
Colours pale and fade from sight
A monochrome scene
Drawn by moonlight

©DGA 20 August 2011 05:29

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About adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

30 Responses to “SUNSET”

  1. SidevieW says :

    They don’t last – do they? supplanted by the monochrome of night

  2. Cindy says :

    And night brings its own palette, no?

  3. sunamu says :

    A monochrome scene Drawn by moonlight… is a fine parting shot Denise. I liked this phrase.

  4. bluebee says :

    And no continent does sunsets quite like Africa! I can smell the firewood burning in the boma and hear the hyenas calling with this poem, Adeeyoyo

  5. johnell74 says :

    Lovely language, Denise.
    Great descriptions. I enjoyed the words you used.
    Thank you.
    John

  6. misswhiplash says :

    Thank you so much for those lovely words.

    I do love to watch the evening sky and see the shadows changing places As it gets darker the colours and clouds become more definite, wonderful time to reflect!

  7. nrhatch says :

    Ooh . . . one of my favorites, Denise! Thanks!

  8. Mike Patrick says :

    This humble night owl must protest. The moon and stars are their own display, and only the night can highlight the fury of a thunderstorm. The fickle setting sun is oft can disappoint. Of course, I’m stuck in the Midwest.

  9. brian says :

    fade to black…nicecapture added…like the drawn by nights hand…great personification…and a beautiful verse….

  10. granny1947 says :

    Beautiful…thanks Adee.

  11. gospelwriter says :

    I like the contrast you draw attention to so beautifully, between fiery sunset and monochrome moonlight…

  12. kateshrewsday says :

    Nature does it so well, Denise :-) Lovely poem.

  13. Classic says :

    I love this post, you have such a beautiful style :D

  14. Gobetween says :

    Each sunset is magical. Thanks for the painting with words.

  15. Tinman says :

    It’s a lovely poem, Adee, and so true, the lovely last colours and then, as you say, the monochrome.

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