The Curly Bits

Sidey’s Weekend Theme – 09.09.2011: The Curly Bits

http://viewfromtheside.wordpress.com/2011/09/09/weekend-theme-37/

The curly witch

Had a curly nose

With curly fingers

And with curly toes

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Her ears were curly

And so was her hat

She lived at home

With her curly cat

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And the curly witch

She fried some bacon

‘cos she loved to eat

All the crispy, crunchy, munchy curly bits

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Image: Author (with apologies!)

©DGA 09 September 2011 17:01

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About adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

46 Responses to “The Curly Bits”

  1. misswhiplash says :

    That was a curly poem ( I mean lovely) may your bits always be curly

  2. SidevieW says :

    hehehe, very wickedly curly

  3. blueviolet says :

    That was adorable!

  4. gospelwriter says :

    Cute! – words and drawing too (and no apologies please :) ) A most lovable witch, methinks..

  5. johnell74 says :

    Denise – why on earth apologise for such a lovely sketch – full of curliness!
    I enjoyed this so much I showed June, and she loved the whole thing.
    We shall read / show it to our grandchildren, and they will no doubt enjoy it,
    as will your grandchildren.
    Loved it!
    John

    • adeeyoyo says :

      I won’t make excuses then, but suffice it to say it didn’t take 5 minutes altogether, rhyme and drawing. Thank you John for being such a good friend and I’m glad June liked it too. ;)

  6. sonsothunder says :

    I have found that the best poetry, art, and prose comes through us sometimes in LESS than 5 minutes…Muse is a wonderful thing, I love this curly little diversion from all the overly intellectualized jargon, and political negativity flying around these days.
    Bacon Bacon Bacon
    God Bless You
    paul

    • adeeyoyo says :

      You are right, Paul. I was just playing the fool on a piece of paper when I did this. But of all that I have written so far, the ones I consider the best all virtually wrote themselves!

      Yes, indeed, bacon, bacon, bacon! Mmmmn.

      Bless you, and thanks for the visit.

  7. granny1947 says :

    I am going to phone my granddaughter right now and read this to her.
    she is going to love it.

  8. granny1947 says :

    She DID love it…giggled away…now I have to get her Mom to print it out so she can learn it.
    You have a new fan.

  9. sunamu says :

    Even if it were for fun, you touched a good subject Denise. Perhaps you have heard of Fractals… Nature by its volition is not Euclidean. Every surface you watch is curly, curvy haphazard but not circular, square or rectangular. They are only our approximations to the ideal. Thus, not only your curly witch, all of us are all curly… curvy… (every bit of us).

    • adeeyoyo says :

      Thanks Sunamu, for teaching me this. What would I do without Google? I am no maths fundi unfortunately though I used to dream I was a reincarnation of a mathematician when I was young. I love the way that everything is analysed and broken down…

  10. brian says :

    ha. this was delightfully fun…nice play on a doodle too..i do that all over my notebook…thanks for the friday smiles…

  11. kateshrewsday says :

    Ha! Love this, picture and words! Think I’ll share this one with Maddie and Felix…

  12. TheIdiotSpeaketh says :

    I like it! I really have no talent at all for poetry…. You make it look very easy. Good drawing too…… I can not even draw a good stick figure :)

    • adeeyoyo says :

      Mark, if you promise you won’t tell anyone, I can’t either! You know, after I started blogging, I came across someone who wrote poetry and wished I could do it too. Next thing I tried and have been doing it ever since. Make no mistake, I am very much an amateur though, hahaha! Lovely to have you on board! :D

  13. nrhatch says :

    Loved it, Denise. I’ve had a sad day and this made me smile all the way down to the tips of my curly bits!

    BTW: That “cat” looks like a floppy haired rabbit. ;)

    • nrhatch says :

      Except for it’s tail . . . it’s a proper tail for a cat. :D

    • adeeyoyo says :

      I’m sorry you had a sad day, Nancy, and glad that this helped a little… :)

      Btw, I can usually copy things, but when it comes to drawing from imagination I need loads more practice. I had the ears, but when I tried to curl the points I made a right mess up! Plus it is literally years since I drew anything! :(

  14. Cindy says :

    Very amusing, adee, I am also thinking of bacon for the theme ;)

  15. she writes says :

    I see a children’s book in the making here!

    • adeeyoyo says :

      You know when my children were little I used to make up stories and think to myself that ‘one day…’ because it was so easy. Now I think I’ve lost that ability. You know the saying ‘If you don’t use it, you lose it’!

  16. Gobetween says :

    Excellent – I love all the curly bits on the witch :)

  17. Tinman says :

    This is brilliant, really funny, I loved it.

    And don’t apologise about the drawing, it’s way better than anything I could do. (though I was going to remark about the rabbit until I saw that Nancy did ;) )

  18. colonialist says :

    Haha! We both went into re verse, and we both ended up with a pig!

    • adeeyoyo says :

      You don’t know how close I came to using the rhyme ‘The Pig with the Curly Tail’, Col. My children and I used to love that one!

    • adeeyoyo says :

      Thanks so much, Nancy, for the recommendation! I appreciate it very much. At first I thought you were introducing us to another blog of yours, lol. I will read through Nancy2′s blog later today. Thanks again. ;)

  19. Selma says :

    I really like your drawing and your porem. The Curly Witch would be a great character in a children’s book!

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