POETRY

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The use of magical, mystical, musical

Words in the weave and weft of verbal tapestries,

Painting pictures in shades and tints,

Writing rhythms with thumps and bumps,

Thwacks and slaps,

With calming, soothing deviations, variations

Juxtaposed to compare and expose,

Reveal and disclose

Moods and sensations,

Perceptions, impressions…

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©DGA 02 October 2011 11:53

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About adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

21 Responses to “POETRY”

  1. TheIdiotSpeaketh says :

    :)

  2. nrhatch says :

    Denise . . . I ADORE this poem! It THWACKS! :D

  3. Paula Tohline Calhoun says :

    This poem sings! Thank you, Dee!

  4. johnell74 says :

    Where did you get all those words from Denise.
    Great fun, hugely entertaining. Lovely cross rhythms.
    Thank you.
    John

    • adeeyoyo says :

      This poem began seriously, then graduated to ‘tongue-in-cheek’ musical rhythms, and back to seriousness, John. It just happened that way. :)

  5. brian says :

    this has a very nice rhythm to verbal tapestries is a great descriptor…yes i think you have captured poetry…smiles.

  6. Ruth says :

    You have summarized the art of poetry very artfully – I thought the weave and weft of verbal tapestries brilliant.

  7. bluebee says :

    I love this sensory overload, Adee – excellent!

  8. Gabrielle Bryden says :

    Wow – what a jazzy, mish mash of poetic musings :) love it! Well done adeeyoyo.

  9. Spacey says :

    to me this looks like contemporary dance…all the ups and downs are unexpected, yet a soothing theme, a strange harmony that in the end entertains…great work! (:

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