You

 .

The heart of my soul

Is a part of Your Whole

A spark of Your flame

A drop in Your sea

You are the God in me

 .

©DGA 06 February 2012 05:04

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About adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

30 Responses to “You”

  1. nrhatch says :

    Lovely, Denise.

    God is the breath in our breath. :D

  2. johnell74 says :

    I love this Denise.
    Reminds me of the poems of St John of the Cross.
    I must go and re-read them!

    Thank you
    John

    • adeeyoyo says :

      Gee, thank you John. You know that I am really ignorant about poetry and poets. I will google him later. Thank you so much for honouring me with the comparison.

  3. inzwakazi says :

    I like the idea of a heart having a soul. And the last line just finished me, too intense.

  4. adeeyoyo says :

    I just woke up with the first few lines in my head and it took just a couple of minutes to finish it – so it isn’t really my poem at all, Inzwakazi. Thank you just the same! :)

  5. Carl D'Agostino says :

    The Holy Spirit is ever present. We just have to remember to invite it in.

  6. adinparadise says :

    Love this, Adee. xxxx

  7. colonialist says :

    Just right, in more than one way.

  8. brian says :

    i am so small and you so big yet still you love me…

  9. Liz @ A Nut in a Nutshell says :

    This is really beautiful.

  10. From The Pews says :

    Sublime…truly…Sublime…

  11. poemsandponderings says :

    A beautiful prayer Denise..

  12. sonsothunder says :

    Yes …it is beautiful…as your heart of hearts…and soul are …very beautiful…
    Bless You…Here’s my latest hit potential…Just for you…


    Bless You
    paul

  13. 1smiles says :

    The immense-ness of love. Beautiful.

  14. bluebee says :

    Lovely, heartfelt sentiments

  15. Ben Naga says :

    “You are the God in me”

    Equally, I am the “me” in You of course … temporarily, at least. :)

  16. The Hook says :

    “You are the God in me”
    Great line.

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