The Sun Grew Dim

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The sun grew dim

Dark clouds massed

Cooling my skin

Hiding your face

Blurring your embrace

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©DGA 03 April 2012 15:15

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About adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

20 Responses to “The Sun Grew Dim”

  1. thehappyhugger says :

    Always so good Adee.
    *hugs*

  2. 1smiles says :

    This feels very sad…

  3. adinparadise says :

    I sense that you’re really missing someone, adee. Hugs to you.

  4. From The Pews says :

    As always, beauty.

    Thank you, Adee ♥

    BTW, please know that I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. And know that it is done with the utmost admiration ♥

    God Love You ♥

  5. Maxi says :

    Is this a sad good bye? Blessings – Maxi

  6. kateshrewsday says :

    This sounds very Good Friday. Darkness lapping at the edges. Hope all’s well, Denise.

    • adeeyoyo says :

      Good Friday may have influenced my post, Kate, but it is actually about being deeply disappointed to realise I have been living a ‘dream’ in more ways than one.

  7. johnell74 says :

    I do agree with Kate, Denise. Very Good Friday.
    I do hope the dark will soon pass.
    Love
    John

  8. brian miller says :

    i def get the sad feel…the sun giving way to the clouds and the embrace blurred….very nice spin…hpe the sun comes back soon…

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