Outer Space

 .

In the blackest black

There’s a speck of light

The smallest dot

Or prick of white

.

Day dusts the dawn

With a rosy hue

But from outer space

The earth looks blue

.

How trifling we seem

In the scheme of things

Our egos are all

But we are too small –

Important only in our heads

As we lie musing in our beds

.

©Denise G Allen 27 July 2012 08:38

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About adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

22 Responses to “Outer Space”

  1. Carl D'Agostino says :

    If we realize that even our planet is but a grain of sand in relationship to the vastness of the universe perhaps our individual grandiosity will be taken down a notch.

  2. adinparadise says :

    In the big scheme of things, we are as significant as an ant or a grain of sand, but we all have an important role to play here. Lovely writing, adee. ;)

  3. 1smiles says :

    So very true! Lovely post.

  4. poemsandponderings says :

    There is no better or safer place to muse than in our beds..Actually I’m always hoping to find a muse in my bed..lol

  5. adeeyoyo says :

    Hi Jack (lol), I’m sure you get amuse quite often in and out of bed!

  6. johnell74 says :

    You touched one of my strains, Denise. The vastness of space and time.
    And the greatness of its creator.
    Thank you
    John

  7. Maxi says :

    Important only in our heads; something to ponder
    Blessings – Maxi

  8. sonsothunder says :

    “From outer space Earth looks blue” …and if not for the indwelling holy spirit of our creator…it would look that way from my bed too…
    Bless
    You

  9. brian miller says :

    it is pretty amazing when you look at it on the grand scale…just how small we are yet big as well…smiles…

  10. The Hook says :

    Sorry I haven’t been around much lately, but my book, The Bellman Chronicles, will be FREE to download on Sept. 10 – 11! Check it out on my Amazon Kindle page.. You won’t be disappointed. And if you can slip me a review, I’d be forever grateful…

    • adeeyoyo says :

      Wow, that’s wonderful, Hook. I will certainly download it and give you feedback. I Look forward to reading it and I’m sure you will get rave reviews!

  11. 2zpoint says :

    Truly thoughts that I feel! This is a great poem…the simplicity allows clarity and puts our lives in perspective. This is definitely one of my favorites from you Denise. Excellent work. Peace be with you

  12. under the skies of arkansas says :

    Important only in our heads lol true that

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