Rear View Mirror

.

blinded by love
no
hormones led me
up the garden path
to see through sightless eyes
visionary-wise
but now
my rear view mirror
shows me the horror
makes it clear
what wasn’t there
naïve trusting without guile
believing
when all the while
hatred in disguise
masqueraded as love
in my fool’s paradise

.

©Denise G Allen, 23 January 2013 09:35

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About adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

14 Responses to “Rear View Mirror”

  1. brian miller says :

    oy looking back it is easier to see than when we are in that moment…and hopefully in that looking back we can learn a bit as well….smiles.

  2. adeeyoyo says :

    I think that we should try to learn from all life’s challenges. Maybe that’s the whole point. :)

  3. colonialist says :

    No bed of roses up that garden path!

  4. thehappyhugger says :

    How true this is, adee.

  5. poemsandponderings says :

    It is always a short trip to “Fools Paradise”. While the return trip to “Realityville” usually takes a lot longer.. Welcome back Denise.

  6. 1smiles says :

    Exasperating trip up the garden path and then down the other side.

  7. adinparadise says :

    Hindsight is a wonderful thing, adee, but we aren’t blessed with it when we most need it. :)

  8. NS Murty says :

    That’s a good simile Denise.

    • adeeyoyo says :

      Thank you, SuNaMu. Every now and then those feelings return to surface, unfortunately, just when I thought they had gone forever.

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