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Missing in the Mall

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standing stationary, silently

feet still, yet moving

escalating panic

surrounded by

a forest of legs

but whose to choose

stretch up on tippy toes

unfamiliar shapes

surfeit of sizes

his scream lit up the hall

‘MAAAmeee!’

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©Denise G Allen, 16 August 2014 08:07

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

7 thoughts on “Missing in the Mall

  1. Oh poor little thing – hope he found her.

  2. Excellent writing Denise!

  3. With a scream like that, I’m sure his Maaamee found him! Love it Denise.

  4. A complete experience in a few lines.

  5. Brilliant, adee. Your poem reminds me of that song from the 1960’s sung by the now disgraced Rolph Harris, “I’ve lost my Mummy.” :)

  6. well hopefully mom found the little one…being lost can def be scary….

  7. Delightful brevity adn a story that says so much more. Well done!

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