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Clouds

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Clouds

I’m floating in the clouds
And sliding down a moonbeam,
Or sitting on a star,
Fishing my life away.

A penny for my thoughts?
Thoughts translate to action –
Where is the satisfaction
Dreaming my life away?

Clouds of fluff like cotton wool,
Clouds of silken thread,
Gloomy clouds, dark and sinister,
Are gathered in my head.

My head is in the clouds
Or clouds are in my head?
Is it downside up or outside in?
Pondering my life away.

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

12 thoughts on “Clouds

  1. Good one adee, there are serious clouds in my head this morning, too much Merlot yesterday…

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  2. sitting on a cloud fishing my life away…pondering life…you brought together things i enjoy on a summer afternoon…i tend to ponder more when i am out in nature…

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  3. I love this Adee. It makes me want to go and lie in the park and watch the clouds drift by.

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  4. Fishing, dreaming, pondering my life away..like it!

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  5. Very impressively up in the clouds!

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  6. I was in the clouds last night myself. I love the way the speaker and the clouds interact.
    so much to reflect on – such beautiful musings

    Please jump in any time at One Shot Wednesday.
    Any theme any length is welcome. At some point we will probably throw in a few themes to write about. We would love our poets to read and comment on at least one poet’s work. Constructive feedback always good
    We will look forward to see you soon at OSW

    smiles from the moon

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