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Danger in the Mist

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Danger in the Mist

My headlights bounced back at me,
The mist so thick I could not see.
I drove on the highway at walking speed,
Much too slow, or so it seemed.

Leaning forward as far as I could,
Trying to peer through the mist ahead,
Trying to guess how far I’d come,
Was my turnoff further on?

I hoped I had not missed the way,
There were no landmarks that I could see,
Nothing but varying shades of grey
In front or to the sides of me.

At last the markings on the road
Gave way to broken lines. I pulled aside
With such relief I could not hide
The tears that welled up in my eyes.

No sooner had I turned off the road
Than I heard a loud and thunderous sound –
An articulated truck sped by
Which would have been the end of me!

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©DGA

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

20 thoughts on “Danger in the Mist

  1. what a close call,
    you captured the danger of driving in misty very animatedly…
    cheers!
    keep it up!
    😉

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  2. I felt the panic, have been there myself, too many times.
    Well paced poem adee.

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  3. I got goosebumps…so good!

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  4. whew. a near miss…makes you think…and shudder…nice write….

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  5. whew
    thanks for sharing that

    I have been 100 mph in a car with fog so thick you could not see more than a trace of the road .
    Stupid stuff long ago ,my friend showing off, seems like a dream now.

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  6. Eish……scary!!!!……it is so good to be back here…..!!!!

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  7. Scary!!!For sure…….and it is so good to be back!!!!

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  8. Very scary Adee, thank heavens your guardian angel was there.

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  9. This one vividly brings back a recollection of a multiple accident we were involved in at Hilton in heavy mist.

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  10. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/the-celebrate-poet-of-july-award-nominations-announcement/

    u r nominated,
    please read other poets and vote for 1 to 30 or 1-? poets from the list.
    thank you in advance!
    🙂

    you win one vote for yourself when you vote.

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