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Mary

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Mary

My phone rang,
Caller unknown,
A message no-one wants,
‘Your son has been killed’
Wrong number.

Since that day, many calls
All to no avail.
Sympathy calls for Mary,
Promises to give me her number
But nothing forthcoming.

The calls are now fewer;
Friends who have been away
And only just heard the news.
I’m sorry Mary, so sorry
I couldn’t reach you.

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

21 thoughts on “Mary

  1. How desperately sad is that?

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  2. Oh my Adee, this is sooooo sad!! This has touched me in a profound way. Sending you love dear Adee xx

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  3. sorry for Mary and you.
    kind of a reminder that it could be any of us anytime.
    thanks for sharing ,it made me think

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  4. so sad…and unable to reach her even with the news..i dont know if this is a good or bad thing…

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    take the butterfly award,
    enjoy!

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  6. hope that you stay strong,
    stay well!

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  7. Like the other said, what a sad situation.

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  8. Such a sad thing for you and for the dear mother Mary, of that precious son… very well written. Heartspell

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  9. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/27/friendship-means-a-world-2-me/
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    pass them to 1 to 10 blogging friends with whom you believe that they deserve them.
    have fun!
    Take good care.

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  10. Mary…

    Mary Lost Her Son…and There is One Son, THE Son that Saved us all…

    Fascinating!

    I read this and thought of Our Blessed Mother…

    It is only upon reading the Comments that I realize it is another Mary…

    Or Is It?

    Perhaps a Reminder??

    Beautiful Work!!

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    • It actually happened, but after writing the poem/tribute I also realised it could be interpreted a different way and perhaps it was meant to be… God works in mysterious ways.

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