After the Accident
choking emotion
heart racing
raw nerves
knotted
in the
very
p
i
t
of my
being
waiting
praying
helpless
until the
OK
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©DGA 15.09.2010
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After the Accident
17/09/2010 at 5:56 am
Made me have an anxiety attack reading it!
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17/09/2010 at 6:05 am
Thank you Cindy. Have a good Friday. 🙂
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17/09/2010 at 7:16 am
WOW!!!
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17/09/2010 at 7:45 am
Thanks so much, Paul! I’ve been wondering where you have been. Hope all’s well with you…
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17/09/2010 at 8:54 am
Wow Adee, scary but so cleverly put together…that is not easy to do!! Kudo’s my friend xx
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17/09/2010 at 9:13 am
Thanks Amanda. The waiting wasn’t easy either. Baie dankie xxx
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17/09/2010 at 9:24 am
Jy is baie welkom my maatjie …lekkerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr Afrikaans 🙂 mwah xx
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17/09/2010 at 10:11 am
My Afrikaans is nie te goed nie – ek oefen nooit en daarom bietjie skaam… xxx
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17/09/2010 at 11:57 am
nice like the drop in pit…been in a few myself and they will def ge the heart racing…
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17/09/2010 at 12:27 pm
Am experimenting a bit when I think the poem could be made better by the presentation.
Only been in two myself, but the angst when it happens to a loved one is the worst!
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17/09/2010 at 5:44 pm
Been there…that is exactly what it feels like!
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18/09/2010 at 3:10 am
Dreadful (and I mean ‘full of dread’) feeling, Besty!
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17/09/2010 at 6:40 pm
Chillingly spot on, Adee.
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18/09/2010 at 3:09 am
Thanks, Halfie, it was the worst, most helpless feeling ever!
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17/09/2010 at 10:48 pm
GEEEEEZE!!
I KNOW THIS FEELING ALL TOO WELL!!!!!!!
Hmm, perhaps I will be driving More careful than usual today 😉
BEAUTIFUL WORK! Emotively Evoking, as Usual!
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18/09/2010 at 3:12 am
Thanks so much for your comment, FTP. I think we should ALL drive more carefully, if not for our own sake, then for the sake of our loved ones.
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17/09/2010 at 11:58 pm
Adee,
Lovely composition, albeit a little scary. Like the experimentation with presentation – certainly makes for a different kind of reading.
Peter
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18/09/2010 at 3:13 am
Hi Peter, thanks for the comment – I really appreciate it!
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19/09/2010 at 5:14 pm
hi again
Sky
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19/09/2010 at 6:49 pm
Hi to you too, thanks for visiting! 😀
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26/09/2010 at 8:14 pm
gonna send this to my mom
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27/09/2010 at 5:03 am
Hope she likes it. 🙂
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04/07/2011 at 10:49 am
Looking up your tag “accident” , I came across these three very sobering poems,
Denise. Well written and very gritty stuff.
(comment somewhat late!)
John
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04/07/2011 at 1:40 pm
Thank you, John. 🙂
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