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After the Accident

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After the Accident

choking emotion
heart racing
raw nerves
knotted
in the
very
p
i
t
of my
being
waiting
praying
helpless
until the
OK

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©DGA 15.09.2010

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

24 thoughts on “After the Accident

  1. Made me have an anxiety attack reading it!

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  2. Wow Adee, scary but so cleverly put together…that is not easy to do!! Kudo’s my friend xx

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  3. nice like the drop in pit…been in a few myself and they will def ge the heart racing…

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    • Am experimenting a bit when I think the poem could be made better by the presentation.

      Only been in two myself, but the angst when it happens to a loved one is the worst!

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  4. Been there…that is exactly what it feels like!

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  5. Chillingly spot on, Adee.

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  6. GEEEEEZE!!

    I KNOW THIS FEELING ALL TOO WELL!!!!!!!

    Hmm, perhaps I will be driving More careful than usual today 😉

    BEAUTIFUL WORK! Emotively Evoking, as Usual!

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  7. Adee,
    Lovely composition, albeit a little scary. Like the experimentation with presentation – certainly makes for a different kind of reading.
    Peter

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  8. gonna send this to my mom

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  9. Looking up your tag “accident” , I came across these three very sobering poems,
    Denise. Well written and very gritty stuff.

    (comment somewhat late!)

    John

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