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You

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You

You were
Kind and considerate,
Gentle, caring, thoughtful,
And deeply compassionate
And I loved you
With every beat of my heart.

I miss
The time we spent together
Picking mussels off the rocks
And walking through the heather
And I loved you
With every beat of my heart.

Time went by
In the blink of an eye,
Talking, laughing, loving, kissing
Under the clear blue sky
And I loved you
With every beat of my heart.

You have gone
Far away from me;
We thought we had forever
But that was not meant to be
Though I loved you
With every beat of my heart.

Photo: thundafunda.com

©DGA 24.09.2010

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

12 thoughts on “You

  1. The love shines through, Adee. How sad that some things are not meant to be.

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  2. This is so full of passion, can’t you find him again?

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  3. i hear a love song in there…
    wonder what kept them apart…i like it open though b/c it makes it easily relatable as i can fill in my own reason…

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  4. Even if it wasn’t meant to be, there is a feeling of forever-ness about this poem. I like that! When a relationship ends for whatever reason, there’s nothing keeping the heart from continuing to sing its love songs…

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  5. Oh Adee…that is so sad…do hope you find that kind of love again.

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  6. Awww Adee, that was so sad, touched every part of my soul…don’t we wish for a love like that again!!?? Hugs xx

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