You
You were
Kind and considerate,
Gentle, caring, thoughtful,
And deeply compassionate
And I loved you
With every beat of my heart.
I miss
The time we spent together
Picking mussels off the rocks
And walking through the heather
And I loved you
With every beat of my heart.
Time went by
In the blink of an eye,
Talking, laughing, loving, kissing
Under the clear blue sky
And I loved you
With every beat of my heart.
You have gone
Far away from me;
We thought we had forever
But that was not meant to be
Though I loved you
With every beat of my heart.
Photo: thundafunda.com
©DGA 24.09.2010
Adeeyoyo's Blog 
25/09/2010 at 6:33 am
The love shines through, Adee. How sad that some things are not meant to be.
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25/09/2010 at 6:46 am
Yes Halfie, I miss him so much… Lucky you with the rain, hey!
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25/09/2010 at 8:30 am
This is so full of passion, can’t you find him again?
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25/09/2010 at 8:36 am
The question is, rather, can I find the same love again?
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25/09/2010 at 12:09 pm
i hear a love song in there…
wonder what kept them apart…i like it open though b/c it makes it easily relatable as i can fill in my own reason…
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25/09/2010 at 12:21 pm
Me too, Brian. I also like things left to the reader’s interpretation…
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25/09/2010 at 5:28 pm
Even if it wasn’t meant to be, there is a feeling of forever-ness about this poem. I like that! When a relationship ends for whatever reason, there’s nothing keeping the heart from continuing to sing its love songs…
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25/09/2010 at 5:55 pm
That is so very true. We will always have our good memories…
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25/09/2010 at 5:52 pm
Oh Adee…that is so sad…do hope you find that kind of love again.
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25/09/2010 at 5:56 pm
I hope so too, Gran. Time will tell…
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27/09/2010 at 2:28 am
Awww Adee, that was so sad, touched every part of my soul…don’t we wish for a love like that again!!?? Hugs xx
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27/09/2010 at 4:58 am
I think we all need that in our lives, Amanda, I know I do! xxx
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