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Freedom in a Bubble

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Freedom in a Bubble

I am in a bubble
Floating in the air,
Drifting in the breeze
To I know not where.

Wonderfully weightless,
Up and up I fly,
Higher and higher
In a cloudless sky.

Oh what a feeling
Of freedom at last –
No more looking back
To the prison of my past.

Photo: http://blog.shirleywalsh.com/bubbles-418.html

©DGA 26.09.2010

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

18 thoughts on “Freedom in a Bubble

  1. “Get the shackles off my feet so I can dance!”

    What a happy poem, adee, I love it!

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  2. And please take me there with you girlfriend…so happy and free. I loved this very much!!! Sending you love xxx

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  3. very nice…the past can weigh us down so much and when we step out of its shadow it can feel so much like weightlessness…great write…

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  4. In a way the past is always a prison, isn’t it? – so easy to get drawn into regrets & such… Love your poem, beautiful, free.

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  5. I really love this one, Adee! It’s wonderfully cheerful and light 🙂

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  6. I have a friend Adee, who despite my constant denials, absolutely love and adore – I realized recently that I probably always will and the honesty with myself has made me feel free, like I’m floating.

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  7. now that is a song if I have ever read one!

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  8. What a happy image! I just want to float away now.

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  9. What a beautiful assembly of words. Read it a few times just for the pleasure of it.
    Cheers, Shane.

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