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Falling to Pieces

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Falling to Pieces

once upon a time
when i was young
i let myself be led
down the rough road
of self-neglect
i was unworthy
of self-respect
constant abuse
informed me
i was no use
until all of a sudden
my eyes could see
how wrong i could be
‘twas hard to make the break
but i knew i could no longer take
more long years of living this lie
of allowing one to be superior
at the expense of my being inferior
i knew it must end
the decision was hard
to be on my own
and face the future alone
but for the sake of my sanity
i had to face the calamity
of watching my world
fall…
…….ing
..to…
….piec..
es

Photo: http://www.rocksinmyheadtoo.com

©DGA 01.10.2010

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

22 thoughts on “Falling to Pieces

  1. Well structure, adee.

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  2. nice…like the structure there in the end…my world fell apart once as well…

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  3. Best decision you ever made…now you can have fun putting the pieces back the way you want them!

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  4. great one, glad you let it fall apart and move on into a new arrangement

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  5. Great one there….kind of how I feel at the moment…

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  6. Love it – such a familiar story to me too, a page (or whole series of them) from my own life…

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    • It is such a pity we had to learn the hard way. With me I think it’s because I was such an optimist and refused to see what was in front of my nose… Still it worked out in the end for the best I think, because experience is always valuable if you make it so.

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  7. Amazing how we always know in the back of our minds when it’s right or wrong…this one resonates my friend, I love the structure of this. Good choice you made for you are a warm and loving soul and I am happy to met you in this virtual world xxxx

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  8. hi!This was a really exceptional Topics!
    I come from roma, I was fortunate to find your topic in google
    Also I get a lot in your subject really thank your very much i will come every day

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  9. GOOD FOR YOU!!!!!!!!

    And look at you now…a True Artist…

    Loved the Structure, BTW 🙂

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  10. Your bravery and determination shines through in so much of your writing.

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