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Hiding

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Sidey’s Weekend Theme: 01.10.2010 – Hiding

Hiding

Hiding

He shivered with anticipation,
As excitement filled the air,
He listened hard for footsteps,
But there were none to hear.

Waiting… wondering… heart fit to burst,
His thoughts running riot,
He pictured the path the hunter would take,
But, oh, it was hard to keep quiet.

Shrieks of laughter filled the air;
And he knew a child had been found,
Then he smiled to himself as he wriggled down
In his hidey hole, without a sound.

Photo: http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1237/1318025368_a83a1f2aa8_o.jpg

©DGA 01.10.2010

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

24 thoughts on “Hiding

    • Goodness me, it appeared just now as SPAM! I thought you were playing on the subject of ‘hiding’ when you asked where your comment had gone!!! Hahaha

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  1. where did my comment go?

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  2. Great write Adee….a rainy Sunday afternoon here…hope yours will be better my dear friend. Hugs xxxx

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    • Thanks, Amanda… we’ve had lovely weather for ages and it’s warmed up too, late 20°C. Unfortunately no rain, although there has been quite a lot along the whole coastline. 😦 Take care xxx

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  3. ha. lots of fun…spent the day yesterday hiding in a corn maze and having fun with the fam myself…fun write…

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  4. I was never very good at hiding. I always was found quickly.

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    • Haha, I couldn’t stand the suspense! Hope you and BV have found a ‘home’ for all your stuff… Awful job, unpacking… but well worth it in the end. 😀

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  5. Hiding … a lovely game of childhood… so full of suspense … so full of enthusiasm.
    came out well

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  6. Nice poem – evokes lovely memories of childhood. One good thing about a large family, we always had somebody to play these sorts of games with…

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  7. oooh lovely, it was always such fun, the anticipation with a little fear

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  8. Lovely Adeeyoyo! Made me want to go out and sneak up on someone 🙂

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  9. So light-hearted and warm…

    Reminds me of being a child with that type of excitement as well…

    Thanks for the Trip Back 🙂

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  10. lovely – evokes that childish feeling of bursting with anticipation 🙂

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