Sidey’s Weekend Theme: 01.10.2010 – Hiding
Hiding
Hiding
He shivered with anticipation,
As excitement filled the air,
He listened hard for footsteps,
But there were none to hear.
Waiting… wondering… heart fit to burst,
His thoughts running riot,
He pictured the path the hunter would take,
But, oh, it was hard to keep quiet.
Shrieks of laughter filled the air;
And he knew a child had been found,
Then he smiled to himself as he wriggled down
In his hidey hole, without a sound.
Photo: http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1237/1318025368_a83a1f2aa8_o.jpg
©DGA 01.10.2010
Adeeyoyo's Blog 
03/10/2010 at 7:17 am
Excellent!
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03/10/2010 at 2:46 pm
Goodness me, it appeared just now as SPAM! I thought you were playing on the subject of ‘hiding’ when you asked where your comment had gone!!! Hahaha
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03/10/2010 at 7:18 am
where did my comment go?
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03/10/2010 at 7:30 am
Teeheehee…
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03/10/2010 at 7:57 am
Great write Adee….a rainy Sunday afternoon here…hope yours will be better my dear friend. Hugs xxxx
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03/10/2010 at 8:27 am
Thanks, Amanda… we’ve had lovely weather for ages and it’s warmed up too, late 20°C. Unfortunately no rain, although there has been quite a lot along the whole coastline. 😦 Take care xxx
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03/10/2010 at 12:55 pm
ha. lots of fun…spent the day yesterday hiding in a corn maze and having fun with the fam myself…fun write…
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03/10/2010 at 2:41 pm
That does sound like fun, Brian. Have a great weekend!
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03/10/2010 at 4:01 pm
I was never very good at hiding. I always was found quickly.
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03/10/2010 at 4:53 pm
Haha, I couldn’t stand the suspense! Hope you and BV have found a ‘home’ for all your stuff… Awful job, unpacking… but well worth it in the end. 😀
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03/10/2010 at 5:03 pm
Hiding … a lovely game of childhood… so full of suspense … so full of enthusiasm.
came out well
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03/10/2010 at 5:19 pm
Yes – I remember we played it for years on and off! Thank you Sunamu. 🙂
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03/10/2010 at 6:11 pm
Nice poem – evokes lovely memories of childhood. One good thing about a large family, we always had somebody to play these sorts of games with…
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03/10/2010 at 6:19 pm
We were lucky, there were at least half a dozen children of around our age in the close neighbourhood… so always some around.
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04/10/2010 at 12:15 am
oooh lovely, it was always such fun, the anticipation with a little fear
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04/10/2010 at 6:23 am
I used to love it, although it did scare me as well…
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04/10/2010 at 2:14 am
Lovely Adeeyoyo! Made me want to go out and sneak up on someone 🙂
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04/10/2010 at 6:24 am
Hahaha, it does make me long to be young again… 😀
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04/10/2010 at 4:24 am
So light-hearted and warm…
Reminds me of being a child with that type of excitement as well…
Thanks for the Trip Back 🙂
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04/10/2010 at 6:27 am
Thank you so much. Reminiscing can be so nice…
I’m enjoying your series on the Saints so much!
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05/10/2010 at 4:53 am
Thank You!!
It just happens that some of my Fave’s are being celebrated in the next few days =o)
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05/10/2010 at 6:00 am
I’m finding it very interesting to read about them – thank you!!!
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10/10/2010 at 11:47 pm
lovely – evokes that childish feeling of bursting with anticipation 🙂
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11/10/2010 at 6:02 am
Oh to be young and innocent again…! 😀
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