Toes in the Shallows
recuperating from the past
dipping my toes
in the shallows
testing the waters
of life
Image: Photobucket.com
©DGA 21.10.2010
Toes in the Shallows
recuperating from the past
dipping my toes
in the shallows
testing the waters
of life
Image: Photobucket.com
©DGA 21.10.2010
I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx
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22/10/2010 at 4:50 am
JUMP IN!!!!!!!!
The water is FINE!!!
Besides, if we’re too cautious, we may miss out 😉
As frightening or painful as it can be, it is still LIVING!
Better to feel than be numb to it all…
GREAT WORK AS USUAL BTW 😉
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22/10/2010 at 4:56 am
You are so right, I mustn’t waste any more of my life… Thank you!!! 😀
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22/10/2010 at 4:55 am
ah 🙂 – took me a long time… Love your poem; the metaphor is both beautiful and apt.
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22/10/2010 at 4:58 am
I am ready now… but why is life so complicated? Thank you Ruth!
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22/10/2010 at 5:27 am
I’m like that at the ocean…ever since I got to see the killer whales while walking on the beach at Waikiki. I decided that there were bigger things than me in those waters!
This poem it very touching in the aspect that we all do something similar to this when we have a down time. sometimes it is hard to just jump right back in. There seems to be a time that is …Just right for all of us after a down time and one just never knows when that time may be…but if it is rushed before that time it often leads to misery( or in the water…cramps!). great metaphor!
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22/10/2010 at 5:33 am
Thanks, 2zpoint! You are right in that we must be ready to ‘take a chance again’ and that is so difficult to tell… 😕
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22/10/2010 at 5:28 am
yeah sometimes it feels good to ease back in…but get ready to jump soon enough…smiles.
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22/10/2010 at 5:37 am
Yes, as soon as I can I will hold my nose and JUMP! 😆
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22/10/2010 at 5:42 am
Jump in with both feet, Adee 🙂
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22/10/2010 at 6:06 am
Thank you, Halfie! Have a good Friday…
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22/10/2010 at 7:13 am
very clever imagery. I like it a lot
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22/10/2010 at 3:19 pm
Thank you Sidey! 🙂
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22/10/2010 at 7:27 am
Go girl, swim, go for the horizon 🙂
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22/10/2010 at 3:21 pm
Haha, Cin. 8)
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22/10/2010 at 9:04 pm
A tentative entrance is sometimes best.
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23/10/2010 at 4:06 am
That is more me, I think…
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23/10/2010 at 2:26 am
You go girl….I am all behind you…Mwah xoxoxoxox
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23/10/2010 at 4:08 am
I’m taking a big breath… and don’t you dare push me, lol! xxx 😀
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