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Surfing in Outer Space

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Surfing in Outer Space

~∞∞∞~

In my dreams at night

I take a great delight

Surfing in outer space.

No boundaries are there

As far as I’m aware

And I’m totally alone

In a black invisible sea.

Manoeuvring my spaceboard

I use my strength of mind

To leave my mass behind.

Left or right, up or down,

Planets, suns and moons,

Whole galaxies go by,

Swooping down a wormhole

And out the other side,

No energy expended,

No barriers extended,

Free, free to be me.

~∞∞∞~

Image: photobucket.com
©DGA 08.11.2010 01:38

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

18 thoughts on “Surfing in Outer Space

  1. sounds great– a fun out-of-body trip

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  2. nice. ok, my geek coming out…there was a comic book character called the silver surfer who did just that…there was also a guitar player joe satriani that did an instrumental album called surfing with the alien that came out late 80s…anyway, your poem took me back to the days of my youth…

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    • When I was looking/surfing, lol, for an illustration, there was a pic of a guy surfing, with Joe Satriani written across the top and I think the pic was called ‘surfing with an alien’. However, I liked this one better. Tks, Brian.

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  3. I love it! You must read a short story called the Unbroken Web in the book of short stories called the Iron Wolf by Richard Adams…it is the best descriptive text explaining dreams that I have read

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  4. Love the freedom of this – whoosh! whoosh! whoosh! Cool poem.

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  5. Sounds wonderful to me, Adee 🙂

    Stunning tube; or as we would say here, gnarley dude!
    xx

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  6. That sounds absolutely wonderful.

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  7. Wow – this is great, Adeeyoyo – nice thoughts to go to sleep with – the weightlessness and silence evoked by your words. bb

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  8. You sleep awesomeness to its limits!

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