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Pain (b)


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Pain (b)


a sword pierced my heart

with hurt so deep

cruel words cut

right into my soul

there is no salve

no healing balm

to soothe the sting

or staunch the blood


©DGA 04.11.2010 7:48 PM

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

14 thoughts on “Pain (b)

  1. Ah, the power of little words …


  2. words are the firecest weapon to use on feeling human beings


  3. ah words weilded by our tongues…can give life or cut it down to size


  4. Our tongues; a double-edged sword.


  5. There’s this saying “Sticks and stones can break your bones, but words will never hurt you,” and I say “Hogwash!” (and a few other choice words I won’t get into here). 😉


  6. There may not be any pain as bad as heart pain(…except knee pain). very good description of a never ending wound.


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