DRIFTWOOD
He walked the street in his bare feet,
Browned by the sun,
Sanded smooth by the wind,
Weathered as driftwood
Cast out by the elements.
He walked alone
And humanity passed by
On the other side.
Image: Photobucket.com
©DGA 22.03.2011 11:18
23/03/2011 at 7:04 am
powerful image, very sad really
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23/03/2011 at 7:16 am
Very sad, I agree, Sidey.
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23/03/2011 at 7:12 am
People do not often notice others in this way often they go unnoticed and they are easily and tragically forgotten, Always keep these people in mind and your heart will always have some warmth even on the coldest day! Visiting you warms my heart and I am sorry it hasn’t been more but I have been very busy these days. Peace be with you!
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23/03/2011 at 7:18 am
I always appreciate your visits, Stuart! I hope your studying is going well. God bless you.
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23/03/2011 at 7:31 am
It’s very sad, these flotsam and jetsam of society. Good poem, adee.
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23/03/2011 at 7:38 am
It is sad, Cindy, and there are numerous reasons why this happens.
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23/03/2011 at 9:33 am
A very powerful reminder … “there but for the grace of God go I”. Lovely poem DGA.
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23/03/2011 at 12:57 pm
We often forget to be grateful. Thanks for the visit and comment, Peter. 🙂
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23/03/2011 at 12:53 pm
That was quite a sad piece, but beautiful.
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23/03/2011 at 12:59 pm
Thank you, BV. I am noticing these people more and more.
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23/03/2011 at 2:06 pm
smiles…speaks much of our society how we treat others…love the driftwood image…
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23/03/2011 at 2:47 pm
Yes, we could do so much better, Brian. I have always adored driftwood. This particular picture lends itself to letting the imagination run free…
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23/03/2011 at 6:12 pm
Love that piece of driftwood. It looks like an animal with front paw outstretched.
Thanks, Adee.
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23/03/2011 at 6:18 pm
Yes, I saw that too, Nancy, and the face and eye with a hanging ear! Lovely… 😆
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23/03/2011 at 6:28 pm
I’m back. I was so focused on that photo, I forgot to comment on your poem.
I love it! Beautiful imagery.
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24/03/2011 at 7:34 am
Thank you so much, Nancy. I’m afraid I did the same to you…! 😀
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23/03/2011 at 7:04 pm
Our invisible people, Adee 😦
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24/03/2011 at 7:35 am
You’re so right, Halfie. We can be so blind.
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23/03/2011 at 7:30 pm
A sad truth beautifully framed, Adee. Well done!
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24/03/2011 at 7:38 am
Thank you, Ruth. It’s a part of what’s wrong with our world, I think.
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23/03/2011 at 10:03 pm
lovely flow. i thought u were talking about Jesus at first. i liked the feet/driftwood parallel. keep on.
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24/03/2011 at 7:46 am
Thank you, doc, for the visit and comment… it could well be…
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24/03/2011 at 12:54 am
You create a beautiful and haunting image and narrative with your words here, Adeeyoyo – this poem speaks volumes on so many levels. bb
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24/03/2011 at 7:47 am
Thank you so much, Bb. I appreciate your comment as I love and respect your work.
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27/03/2011 at 3:30 pm
Deep and powerful. The image fits perfectly, and builds on your words.
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27/03/2011 at 3:47 pm
Thank you so much, Shane.
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15/11/2012 at 4:48 pm
Love it!
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15/11/2012 at 5:10 pm
I am so glad, thank you!. It is one of my favourites.
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