The Key to my Heart
You broke my trust
When you carelessly lost
The key to my heart.
It is irreplaceable,
You are irresponsible,
And there is no replica available.
If, over time,
I am able to find
A duplicate door,
Will my heart ever thaw?
Will I find a guarantor
To keep it safe for evermore?
Image: Photobucket.com
©DGA 01.04.2011 16:32
Adeeyoyo's Blog 
05/04/2011 at 5:04 am
This reminds me of Remember The Tin Man by Tracey Chapman:
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05/04/2011 at 5:17 am
Very similar sentiments, Nancy. Thanks for sending me this. 🙂
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05/04/2011 at 5:47 am
Another fine poem, adee.
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05/04/2011 at 5:55 am
Thanks, Cin. 😀
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05/04/2011 at 7:14 am
Hits the nail on the head, Adeeyoyo. And that pic is beautiful.
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05/04/2011 at 7:20 am
Thanks, Kate. 8)
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05/04/2011 at 8:24 am
Another great piece of work Adee.
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05/04/2011 at 8:35 am
Thanks so much, Barb19! 😀
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05/04/2011 at 11:48 am
I like the metaphor of a duplicate door but I think you might be better off with a new door if the old one is so unreliable 🙂
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05/04/2011 at 1:07 pm
I think you’re right and also, maybe, a security gate! 😉
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05/04/2011 at 10:33 pm
lol!
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06/04/2011 at 5:59 am
😆
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05/04/2011 at 10:47 pm
Being betrayed by a loved one cuts deep.
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06/04/2011 at 6:00 am
One of the worst hurts, Carl.
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06/04/2011 at 2:04 am
I love the rythym of the close rhymes in the last 3 lines of both stanzas – they give a suitably imploring quality to the words – nice, Adeeyoyo
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06/04/2011 at 6:01 am
Thanks so much, Bb. 🙂
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06/04/2011 at 3:55 am
I like the image of the door in the heart. That’s what it feels like when a heart is broken – it is as if a door closes. Good one.
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06/04/2011 at 6:03 am
Thanks, Selma, it felt like that to me too.
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07/04/2011 at 7:30 am
Cool poem 🙂 I’d say there are plenty of doors and keys around – try as many as you can – haha.
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07/04/2011 at 12:01 pm
Bwahahahaha, Gabe, you norty girl!
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