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Mac the Knife


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Mac the Knife *Edited

There was this bloke
Who smelled of smoke,
A husky, dusky scent;
Tall and proud,
Head and shoulders above the crowd,
He walked, he stalked,
But seldom talked,
A mystery with a history,
‘Twas said he killed his wife –
A second Mac the Knife

Β©DGA 11.06.2011 20:48

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

22 thoughts on “Mac the Knife

  1. Brilliant πŸ™‚ He’s quite a guy!


  2. scary for sure…an intersting guy and you capture him well with lots of little touches…


  3. Rather dark, Adee.
    I was hoping for a light-hearted limerick like laugh at the end.

    Favorite line: A husky, dusky scent


  4. Hope the weekend has been a good one.
    Lovely down here!


  5. Very different from your normal thing, and really interesting. πŸ™‚


  6. *meerkat utters a squeak and flees in terror*


  7. Nooo! I always like a man or bloke who smells of smoke. Reminds me of camping :).

    Thank you for your sweet comments at my blog!


  8. well, the picture and words together had me smiling Adeeyoyo (as long as it’s fictional!)


  9. Ooh adee, this is different to your usual. Nice!


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