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Mac the Knife

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Mac the Knife *Edited

There was this bloke
Who smelled of smoke,
A husky, dusky scent;
Tall and proud,
Head and shoulders above the crowd,
He walked, he stalked,
But seldom talked,
A mystery with a history,
‘Twas said he killed his wife –
A second Mac the Knife

Image: clynnatkins_photobucket.com
©DGA 11.06.2011 20:48

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

22 thoughts on “Mac the Knife

  1. Brilliant 🙂 He’s quite a guy!

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  2. scary for sure…an intersting guy and you capture him well with lots of little touches…

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  3. Rather dark, Adee.
    I was hoping for a light-hearted limerick like laugh at the end.

    Favorite line: A husky, dusky scent

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  4. Hope the weekend has been a good one.
    Lovely down here!

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  5. Very different from your normal thing, and really interesting. 🙂

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  6. *meerkat utters a squeak and flees in terror*

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  7. Nooo! I always like a man or bloke who smells of smoke. Reminds me of camping :).

    Thank you for your sweet comments at my blog!

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  8. well, the picture and words together had me smiling Adeeyoyo (as long as it’s fictional!)

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  9. Ooh adee, this is different to your usual. Nice!

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