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CLARITY

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CLARITY

Come fly with me
Through the sky with me
And we can see
Ourselves with clarity

Learn to let go
Leave the evil below
Drift with the flow
And help our faith grow

Unload the weight
Of worry and hate
And close the gate
Before it’s too late

©DGA 24 July 2011 07:47

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

40 thoughts on “CLARITY

  1. so true..it’s as clear as a bell ( that is a strange saying)

    loved the poem. you are so clever with words

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  2. Very good Adee…and so true!

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  3. Oh Denise. That’s lovely.
    I’m a babe in arms when it comes to instant poetry

    Thanks John

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  4. Rhyme schemes aaaa,bbbb,cccc. I like to play with different constructions from time to time. Also plan syllabic count very precisely as an added twist.

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  5. What a great and “uplifting” poem (no pun intended – or did I) to read this Sabbath day, Dee. For my sake you should probably remind me to close the barn door, and LOCK the gate behind me!

    Thanks for adding to my joy – even when you are in the midst of struggling to heal. You always manage to get me thinking and/or smiling! Dear friend – I wish you enough. . .

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  6. this has a fun rhythm to it..learning to fly is one of my fav tom petty songs to..soemtimes we have to relearn it along the way as well…

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  7. Lovely, succinct and no I have ‘Come Fly With Me’ looping round in my head with new lyrics…

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  8. Another one which would lend itself well to becoming a good song for a band.

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  9. I sang that one in my head.

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  10. Clarity is wonderful to have and terrible to lose. Thanks, Denise.

    For some reason, Elton John’s “Harmony” popped into my head ~ with Clarity:

    [Clarity] and me
    We’re pretty good company
    Looking for an island
    In our boat upon the sea . . .

    I’m anxious to hear about your rehab this week. Best of luck as you start moving around.

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  11. lovely – it would be wonderful to fly at whim, Adee

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  12. Very nice at the start to the new week, adee 🙂

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  13. I really like the rhythm of this. It flows so nicely. Very well done!

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  14. I’m loving the sounds of this one!

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  15. I wish more blog owners had taken the time and care that you definitely take to produce such substantial quality content. Nicely done.

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  16. Aw, this was a really nice post. In idea I would like to put in writing like this additionally – taking time and actual effort to make a very good article… but what can I say… I procrastinate alot and by no means seem to get something done.

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  17. Thanks, CLARITY Adeeyoyo's Blog is a really intresting blog. I really like the information posted here regurarly and I often come back here for more. Just keep updating it.

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  18. I don’t even know how I ended up here, but I thought this post was great. I don’t know who you are but certainly you’re going to a famous blogger if you are not already 😉 Cheers!

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    • I don’t know either, Bucino, but I’m glad you came. I had a look at your blog and it looks very interesting. What language is it written in because I would like to translate it. Thanks for the visit. 😀

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