CLARITY
Come fly with me
Through the sky with me
And we can see
Ourselves with clarity
Learn to let go
Leave the evil below
Drift with the flow
And help our faith grow
Unload the weight
Of worry and hate
And close the gate
Before it’s too late
©DGA 24 July 2011 07:47
Adeeyoyo's Blog 
24/07/2011 at 9:27 am
so true..it’s as clear as a bell ( that is a strange saying)
loved the poem. you are so clever with words
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24/07/2011 at 11:20 am
Thanks, Patrecia. I wonder where that saying originated? 🙂
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24/07/2011 at 10:58 am
Very good Adee…and so true!
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24/07/2011 at 11:22 am
Thanks for the visit, Gran. Sometimes we can’t see the wood for the trees! Hope you’re enjoying your weekend… 🙂
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24/07/2011 at 12:46 pm
Oh Denise. That’s lovely.
I’m a babe in arms when it comes to instant poetry
Thanks John
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24/07/2011 at 1:06 pm
Some poems just write themselves, like this one and the one before, just from a germ of an idea or even a single word…
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24/07/2011 at 1:23 pm
Rhyme schemes aaaa,bbbb,cccc. I like to play with different constructions from time to time. Also plan syllabic count very precisely as an added twist.
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24/07/2011 at 3:37 pm
Yes, Carl, I also fiddle around sometimes for effect…
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24/07/2011 at 2:40 pm
What a great and “uplifting” poem (no pun intended – or did I) to read this Sabbath day, Dee. For my sake you should probably remind me to close the barn door, and LOCK the gate behind me!
Thanks for adding to my joy – even when you are in the midst of struggling to heal. You always manage to get me thinking and/or smiling! Dear friend – I wish you enough. . .
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24/07/2011 at 3:39 pm
You are always so encouraging, Paula. Enjoy the rest of your weekend. 🙂
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24/07/2011 at 3:53 pm
this has a fun rhythm to it..learning to fly is one of my fav tom petty songs to..soemtimes we have to relearn it along the way as well…
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24/07/2011 at 7:03 pm
One thing I really would love to do if I could have my life over is learn to fly… I can’t imagine anything better than that feeling of total freedom!
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26/07/2011 at 5:09 am
if i had a superpower it would be to fly…
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28/07/2011 at 5:00 am
It would be wonderful, I agree!
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24/07/2011 at 4:10 pm
Lovely, succinct and no I have ‘Come Fly With Me’ looping round in my head with new lyrics…
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24/07/2011 at 7:04 pm
Ah yes, lovely song, Kate…
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24/07/2011 at 4:26 pm
Another one which would lend itself well to becoming a good song for a band.
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24/07/2011 at 7:07 pm
Thanks, Col. I will be getting a swollen head if I’m not careful… 😆
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24/07/2011 at 5:47 pm
I sang that one in my head.
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24/07/2011 at 7:09 pm
Too serious at the end I think for a song, Otin, but thanks. 😀
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25/07/2011 at 7:28 am
Clarity is wonderful to have and terrible to lose. Thanks, Denise.
For some reason, Elton John’s “Harmony” popped into my head ~ with Clarity:
[Clarity] and me
We’re pretty good company
Looking for an island
In our boat upon the sea . . .
I’m anxious to hear about your rehab this week. Best of luck as you start moving around.
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28/07/2011 at 6:22 pm
All fine Nancy, thanks. Exercises… exercises. Haven’t had the brace fitted so not walking yet. Wed 3rd should see it done. 🙂
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25/07/2011 at 8:54 am
lovely – it would be wonderful to fly at whim, Adee
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28/07/2011 at 4:51 am
Ah, wouldn’t it just, Bb!
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25/07/2011 at 10:46 am
Very nice at the start to the new week, adee 🙂
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28/07/2011 at 4:52 am
Thanks, Cindy. 😀
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26/07/2011 at 8:34 am
I really like the rhythm of this. It flows so nicely. Very well done!
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28/07/2011 at 4:53 am
Thank you, Selma.
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29/07/2011 at 10:36 am
I’m loving the sounds of this one!
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29/07/2011 at 10:43 am
Thanks, BV. 🙂
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29/07/2011 at 1:09 pm
happy friday adee!
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29/07/2011 at 1:24 pm
Thank you, Brian. The same to you, enjoy your weekend!
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29/07/2011 at 9:36 pm
I wish more blog owners had taken the time and care that you definitely take to produce such substantial quality content. Nicely done.
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30/07/2011 at 6:11 am
Thank you very much for your visit and comment, Dorian. 🙂
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01/08/2011 at 1:56 pm
Aw, this was a really nice post. In idea I would like to put in writing like this additionally – taking time and actual effort to make a very good article… but what can I say… I procrastinate alot and by no means seem to get something done.
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01/08/2011 at 2:24 pm
Thanks for the visit and comment. You don’t know what you can do until you try…
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06/08/2011 at 7:46 pm
Thanks, CLARITY Adeeyoyo's Blog is a really intresting blog. I really like the information posted here regurarly and I often come back here for more. Just keep updating it.
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07/08/2011 at 9:02 am
Thanks very much. 🙂
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08/08/2011 at 4:20 pm
I don’t even know how I ended up here, but I thought this post was great. I don’t know who you are but certainly you’re going to a famous blogger if you are not already 😉 Cheers!
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08/08/2011 at 5:44 pm
I don’t know either, Bucino, but I’m glad you came. I had a look at your blog and it looks very interesting. What language is it written in because I would like to translate it. Thanks for the visit. 😀
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