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Migration – Haiku

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Migration

~~~

Driven by instinct

They obey their inner urge

With a one track mind

~~~

©DGA 17 August 2011 08:09

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

20 thoughts on “Migration – Haiku

  1. with a few short lines you said it all

    great ..thank you

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  2. Wildebeest or Whale
    Swallows or snow goose
    Toad or turtle
    Crab or Nightingale
    Who taught them?
    Who programmed them?
    How did they learn.?

    Nice thought, Denise.
    See what you did to the inside of my head!!!
    John

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  3. The fewer the words, the more impact – you did it with these words Denise!

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  4. Love: With a ONE TRACK mind.

    Wonderful word play, Denise.

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  5. Works very well with the videos!

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  6. Fantastic. I’ve been thinking about your migration post a lot.

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  7. Good haiku, Adee (applicable to some humans, too!)

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  8. are you sure you are talking about animals at this point?

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  9. Oh yeah. One track mind, for sure. Very apt!

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  10. Most of the migration here is birds, and the season is approaching.

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    • In the days when we had overhead telephone lines, we would see the birds congregating in rows on the wires getting ready to fly off for the winter.

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