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Star Surround

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On a moonless night,

With only stars for light,

The view at the lake

Was great – make no mistake!

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From the stars overhead

To the stars at my feet,

Reflected in the deep,

I stood alone in star-filled space!

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©DGA 14 September 2011 12:25

 

 

 

 

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

17 thoughts on “Star Surround

  1. Listen, adee, can you hear the birdies waking up? 🙂

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  2. As above . . . the glow below.

    Beautiful. 😀

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  3. What a wonderful image you have painted, Denise.
    I am standing there!
    John

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  4. Wow, I can almost see you as the only point of separation from sky and reflection…and feel it, as if it were me. Great projection.
    God Bless You
    paul

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  5. Your lovely poem reminds me of one of the very best experiences of my life, Adeeyoyo – sleeping tentless around a campfire in the middle of the Sinai Desert – our guide called it the “hotel of a million stars” – a vast understatement 🙂

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    • Wow, Bb, that must have been GREAT! Especially when, out in the country, many, many more stars are clearly visible. That is what I loved about camping (with tents, lol)!

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  6. WoW! Beautiful experience. So thrilling to read. You are blessed, denise!

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  7. nice…love to be under the blanket of night with all the stars cast across in their twinkle…lovely adee….

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  8. Lovely – there’s something so awe inspiring about a night where stars abound, visibly. I grew up in the country and know of what I speak (although we didn’t have a lake there – how beautiful that must have been!)

    Stars Surround is the perfect title…

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