~
Chosen for her easy nature
Pliability, malleability
Plasticine-like quality
To be moulded into the perfect wife
To share his ambitions
His dreams and drive
T’wards the perfect life
~
(unfinished)
©DGA 13 October 2011 07:28
Invisible 1
Adeeyoyo's Blog
I write what I feel…
13/10/2011 at 9:20 am
The perfect wife…you are writing about me! LOL!!!!
Why is it not finished…is it to be like the unfinished symphonies?
love P
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 9:31 am
It will be finished quite soon, Patrecia. I just have to figure out how…? and I agree you ARE the perfect wife, lol!
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 3:27 pm
My husband once asked: Why can’t you do as you’re told?
My response: Because I’m not a robot.
I think you would have to remove emotions to have the “perfect wife.”
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 3:36 pm
I think that’s why some guys like to have someone who will adapt to what THEY want in a wife, Maxi. The wife must subjugate herself to the ‘Master’s voice’… (i.e. become invisible?). You’re on the ball, girl! 😀
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 8:07 pm
or scarily suppress them!
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 8:21 pm
Ah, yes, now we’re getting the picture… thanks, John. 🙂
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 3:57 pm
Unfinished? They do say ‘that a man works sun to sun, but a woman’s work is never done’!
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 4:05 pm
Bwahahaha, Jack, you’ll be the death of me! I’m working on the next section of my little tale, but I’m afeared that my internet is going to cut out and I’m waiting (for the 2nd week) for them to come and install my ADSL. So I’m contemplating posting – or not posting…
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 6:00 pm
Sounds like a Stepford Wife in the making. Ack!
When we got married . . . I took the “obey” out of “love, honor, and obey.” 😀
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 7:26 pm
Good for you Nancy! I got married before they allowed the option, haha (dating myself again)!
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 6:22 pm
i dunno…not sure i want a maleable wife…at least one that is just maleable…not sure it is a good thing…
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 7:42 pm
Haha, Brian, some guys like to lay down the law. Much better to discuss things in a democratic way, huh? You are a new generation male aren’t you? 🙂
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 8:09 pm
June has never been compliant. We have shared a great adventure side by side.
John
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 8:25 pm
That’s just how it should be, John. Respecting each other’s opinion. And allowing a different opinion!
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 8:32 pm
I want to read this one when it’s finished. . .or is i being “unfinished” part of the context of the poem?
XO Paula
LikeLike
13/10/2011 at 8:53 pm
I’m not sure where it’s going, Paula… but there is more… I think… No, I know, lol.
LikeLike
14/10/2011 at 12:02 am
I’m way too controlling to be that kind of wife!
LikeLike
14/10/2011 at 2:04 am
That’s good, BV. Self-respect is very important.
LikeLike