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LIGHT

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Light

Bright

Clear

As a tear

Rain-washed sky

Clouds scudding by

Radiant sunshine

Splashes its way

Into a brand new day

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©DGA 21 October 2011 07:42

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

30 thoughts on “LIGHT

  1. Fresh starts sound wonderful!

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  2. I think they made tears in an attempt to wash away grief. Most times they don’t work very well.

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  3. Wash away sadness and let the sunshine in… true, though sometimes it can take many, many tears, Carl.

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  4. the sunlight splashing its way into a new day makes a great visual…smiles. have a lovely day!

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  5. It’s springtime there, new beginings abound, it is reflected in this beautiful poem….Thanks for depressing me, as the winter approaches. lol

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  6. Lovely. For me nothing quite equals the joy of watching a new day break, especially when clouds scud away to make way for the sun to rise in all its majesty.

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  7. Loved it Denise. The juxtaposition of sunlight and raindrops is beautiful.
    John

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  8. very nice too!

    love to you

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  9. Thanks, Denise!

    The sun is always shining . . . even if clouds obscure our view. 😀

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  10. Short and sweet aaand refreshing; I’m ready for a brand new day.

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  11. Dazzling, Denise 🙂

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  12. Clear as a tear. i like that.

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  13. that morning sun on the highveld after overnight rain, so very clear!

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  14. I can smell that lovely rain-washed air, Adeeyoyo, and love the image of the “scudding clouds” – an utterly delightful poem

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  15. Very uplifting poem adeeyoyo – ‘I can see clearly now the rain has gone’ – the promise of a brand new day keeps all of us going.

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  16. I really like this, Adee. The images are pure and as so many have said – uplifting. The rain-washed sky is beautiful. I feel all jolly after reading this!

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