*
The beat of heat
From the sun
Caresses my skin
Draws out the sweat
Helps me forget
Winters chill
Unquenchable thirst
I need a draught
A refreshing waft
To shoot the breeze
And be able to breathe
*
©DGA 26 October 2011 18:25
*
The beat of heat
From the sun
Caresses my skin
Draws out the sweat
Helps me forget
Winters chill
Unquenchable thirst
I need a draught
A refreshing waft
To shoot the breeze
And be able to breathe
*
©DGA 26 October 2011 18:25
I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx
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26/10/2011 at 8:46 pm
I can almost feel the heat, Denise. Which is good, because it’s freezing here, and raining.
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26/10/2011 at 8:59 pm
I believe you Kate. My sister only just got her washing inside before it pelted down. We have been having a bit of a heat wave here and need rain badly. However I hear the rain is on its way, just in time for Friday’s cricket. Gee you can’t have everything can you?
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26/10/2011 at 9:42 pm
soak it up while you can…we are supposed to turn cold this weekend…i think you are opposite right?
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27/10/2011 at 12:14 am
We are supposed to be going into summer, but the forecast for this weekend is cold and rain, haha.
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26/10/2011 at 9:59 pm
Oh Denise – the feel of spring is magic. I can just remember it!! Here we are watching the wind take the leaves from the trees, ready for winter.
But one thing is sure spring will rise again!
John
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27/10/2011 at 12:16 am
Yes, the circles of life and of seasons of the sun, John. I think every season has its own magic!
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26/10/2011 at 10:51 pm
From this piece I can envisage a sunnier day than we had! Still, the overcast was warm and the beach (at long last) much enjoyed by Pooch Pack and self.
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27/10/2011 at 12:21 am
You lucky devil, Col! It has actually been in the 30’s here, but rather overcast with warm, heavy air, not at all humid, but quite uncomfortable, sort-of blanket-like and quite unpleasant.
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26/10/2011 at 11:24 pm
Nice wordplay, Adee 😀
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27/10/2011 at 12:21 am
Thanks, Bb! 😉
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27/10/2011 at 1:19 am
Nice. I’d like to forget winter’s chill… but it hasn’t even started yet.
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27/10/2011 at 6:55 am
Thanks, Ruth. I’m sorry, but there’s no avoiding it, lol! But there are nice lightweight warm clothes around. I always buy end-of-season specials.
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27/10/2011 at 3:18 am
I enjoy the arrival of warm weather far more than its departure. But don’t bake! 😀
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27/10/2011 at 6:56 am
Yes, I do too, Nancy, but it’s amazing how soon it is before we long for change again! 😉
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27/10/2011 at 5:40 am
That made me so jealous….But I am joining you in that beer as we speak. Soak up the rays and the suds..Nice.
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27/10/2011 at 6:57 am
Enjoy, Jack, make the most of it… 😀
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27/10/2011 at 7:00 am
Much better than winter, eh, adee?
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27/10/2011 at 7:16 am
Overall, yes, I think so Cin, but there are times I love that fresh, icy wind, or the cool breeze with the undertones of snow in the mountains. It is really so nice to have you back again… take care. 🙂
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27/10/2011 at 8:20 am
Nothing like a cold beer on a hot day 🙂 Nice foray into the heat of day.
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27/10/2011 at 8:30 am
I don’t think I’m really looking forward to summer… prefer the spring/autumn days…
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28/10/2011 at 4:36 am
Obviously a woman who understands heat. Can’t say I’m looking forward to the Sydney summer – it is always exhausting. Very nicely done!
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28/10/2011 at 9:53 am
Thanks, Selma, maybe understands but not likes! Very harsh heat here usually in midsummer!
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28/10/2011 at 6:39 am
Takes me straight to summer this one!
Isnt it funny how in winter we complain about how cold it gets, and how badly we want it to be summer
And in summer we complain about how hot and sticky it gets, and how badly we wish winter comes back! 🙂 I get that every year. Alot less with summer though 🙂
Awesome poem Denise, 🙂
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28/10/2011 at 9:56 am
Thanks Kieran. That is so true – we are never satisfied because sumer can be TOO hot and winter TOO cold! 😦 I think that overall I prefer spring and autumn… 😛
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