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Secrets of the Wind

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The wind touches her hair,

Gently warms the air,

Whispers in her ear,

Secrets for no one to hear.

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She listens to the secrets

Told her by the spirits

About sunrise and sunsets

About castles and turrets.

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Magical worlds of fantasy,

Mystical scenes of make-believe,

Are they fact or fallacy,

Why then so hard to conceive.

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Sitting silently watching the sea,

Letting her thoughts roam free,

She is brought back to reality

By the mischievous playful breeze.

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©DGA 10 November 2011 04:09

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

20 thoughts on “Secrets of the Wind

  1. I love the wind ~ its power flows through me, recharging my batteries. Thanks, Denise.

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  2. Nice. I’m a lover of wind as well…

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  3. smiles…love sitting on the beach and the breeze tinted with salt ahh it brings me to life…and if that is reality i am all about it..smiles.

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  4. I can smell the salt air, and here the gulls cry,
    caked sand on my feet, from footprints now dry.

    Very alluring post Denise, thanks,

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  5. Love the last bit…it has happened to me many times.

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  6. Woooooheehhhh …did ya feel that?

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  7. A whistle in the air.. and a breeze through your hair..lol

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    • I hope we do get a breeze or two here today, it’s so hot outside already! Anyway, I’m late having a shower then I think I’ll watch the cricket. Day 2 of the 1st Test, SA vs Australia. And make popcorn to nibble at. Go well, Paul.

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  8. Lovely description of a “daydream” Adee

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  9. lovely words which I enjoyed reading..thank you Denise x

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  10. Sounds like a magical daydream!

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