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You

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The heart of my soul

Is a part of Your Whole

A spark of Your flame

A drop in Your sea

You are the God in me

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©DGA 06 February 2012 05:04

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

30 thoughts on “You

  1. Lovely, Denise.

    God is the breath in our breath. 😀

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  2. I love this Denise.
    Reminds me of the poems of St John of the Cross.
    I must go and re-read them!

    Thank you
    John

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    • Gee, thank you John. You know that I am really ignorant about poetry and poets. I will google him later. Thank you so much for honouring me with the comparison.

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  3. I like the idea of a heart having a soul. And the last line just finished me, too intense.

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  4. I just woke up with the first few lines in my head and it took just a couple of minutes to finish it – so it isn’t really my poem at all, Inzwakazi. Thank you just the same! 🙂

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  5. The Holy Spirit is ever present. We just have to remember to invite it in.

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  6. Love this, Adee. xxxx

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  7. Just right, in more than one way.

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  8. i am so small and you so big yet still you love me…

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  9. Sublime…truly…Sublime…

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  10. A beautiful prayer Denise..

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  11. Yes …it is beautiful…as your heart of hearts…and soul are …very beautiful…
    Bless You…Here’s my latest hit potential…Just for you…

    Bless You
    paul

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  12. The immense-ness of love. Beautiful.

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  13. Lovely, heartfelt sentiments

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  14. “You are the God in me”

    Equally, I am the “me” in You of course … temporarily, at least. 🙂

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  15. “You are the God in me”
    Great line.

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