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Vagabond

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Golden vagabond

in a fishpond

aerodynamic shape

sleek and smooth

makes his escape

through dilute air

in a watery matrix

by means of

execu-tricks

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©DGA 11 February 2012 13:45

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

33 thoughts on “Vagabond

  1. Sorry, but I’m a bit slow on this one. The fish jumped out? And the significance of execu-tricks/trix?

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    • The fish escaped by executing all his tricky manouvres. An attempt at wordplay, lol!

      He didn’t jump out of the water – ‘…through dilute air in a watery matrix…’

      Water is a chemical substance with the chemical formula H2O. A water molecule contains one oxygen and two hydrogen atoms connected by covalent bonds.

      en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Water

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  2. That is lovely Adee.
    Why do I suddenly have to fill in all sorts of details to comment?

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    • Thanks, Gran. I have had to approve your comment. Maybe they are ‘fixing’ things, e.g. I have had to wait for approval each and every time I comment on some bloggers’ posts.

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  3. execu-tricks – this is how most governments operate

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  4. ha nice word play there at the end…nice capture of the fish…smiles.

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  5. A slippery, tricky customer indeed, Adee. Now you see him, now you don’t 😉 xxx

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  6. You’ve made me miss the fish ponds here. It’s all frozen and white for a couple more months..

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  7. Fish: lovely creatures to observe but sometimes tricky to find!

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  8. With execu-tricks,,, the vagabond is not gold…but the parachute is.. Nice work, Denise.

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  9. Splish . . . splash
    Goldfish taking a bath

    Hey! Can I get a bit of privacy here?! 😆

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  10. nice piece! it was wonderful…i just love the style you write in.

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  11. Good fun, Denise. I love “execu-tricks”.
    Thank you

    John

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  12. Hahaha, thanks John. 😀

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  13. Love the word execu-tricks 🙂

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  14. I’ve seen those execu-tricks, Adee – I had a fish tank as a child and one night one of my miniature sharks leapt straight from the tank and landed on my bedside lamp lightbulb, which promptly exploded – big fright!

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    • Hahaha, Bb, I had a goldfish bowl for a long time until 1996 when I moved to Joeys. Don’t ask me how many times I had to pick the goldfish up off the floor and put him back in…

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