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Becalmed

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Becalmed on a silver sea

an ocean of slow motion

after a tropical storm

feelings have flown

hither and thither blown

littered, scattered

across the ocean

in a cyclone of emotion

~

©DGA 03 March 2012 07:16

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

24 thoughts on “Becalmed

  1. Just bask in the afterglow I say…want a smoke?

    Love ya girl…

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  2. Love you too, you are such a mindreader, Paul! A cig would be so welcome, but I stopped three or four years ago… still miss them tho’! Bless you, my friend.

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  3. Makin’ up is so much fun… Kudos on the cigs; gave them up twelve yrs. ago.

    Blessings – Maxi

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  4. Relax and read or write about the wonders of navigation till the wind gets up again.

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  5. Beautiful calm: I like an ocean of slow motion. I have to admit, though, I love watching it when it’s all riled up too… 😀

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  6. smiles…nice flow through your words…catching hte rhythm left after the storm of emotion…can read this a couple ways but i will read it as a good thing…

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  7. Sending you hugs, Adee. xxx

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  8. A calm after the storm is better than a calm before storm, Denise. It’s so wonderful to imagine navigating on calm seas after the storm. A certain material for poetic experience of nature.

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  9. Calm is all the sweeter after a commotion, Denise…

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  10. Becalmed is such a beautiful word and sets the scene so well. Love the silver sea!

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  11. I hope March brings that for me. February has been a full throttle rollercoaster ride.

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  12. Our emotions can be such a surprise sometimes.

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  13. Now for the bad news…
    Or, depending on how one sees it.
    Solar Storm Tomorrow at sunrise…on the east coast of the U.S. anyway…not sure when you’ll see it.

    http://sonsothunder.wordpress.com/2012/…/sunrise-may-turn-out-the-lights…

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    • Oh dear, I hope it doesn’t affect my internet reception, lol! Or the lights for that matter. I have to get up early and bake for a minor celebration. Thanks for the warning, Paul. God bless you!

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