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The Sun Grew Dim



The sun grew dim

Dark clouds massed

Cooling my skin

Hiding your face

Blurring your embrace


©DGA 03 April 2012 15:15

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

20 thoughts on “The Sun Grew Dim

  1. Always so good Adee.


  2. This feels very sad…


  3. I sense that you’re really missing someone, adee. Hugs to you.


  4. As always, beauty.

    Thank you, Adee ♥

    BTW, please know that I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. And know that it is done with the utmost admiration ♥

    God Love You ♥


  5. Is this a sad good bye? Blessings – Maxi


  6. This sounds very Good Friday. Darkness lapping at the edges. Hope all’s well, Denise.


    • Good Friday may have influenced my post, Kate, but it is actually about being deeply disappointed to realise I have been living a ‘dream’ in more ways than one.


  7. I do agree with Kate, Denise. Very Good Friday.
    I do hope the dark will soon pass.


  8. i def get the sad feel…the sun giving way to the clouds and the embrace blurred….very nice spin…hpe the sun comes back soon…


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