Adeeyoyo's Blog

I write what I feel…




The coolest draft wafts

 Through the branches of the tree,

Ruffling its leaves

As I lie curled up with my book

In the elbow of its crook;

With creaks and groans like old bones,

Branches spread wide overhead,

Roots range far across this resting place,

The quick nourished by the dead,

This cemetery comforts me

With Life’s circle of eternity.


©DGA 08 June 2012 11:21

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

19 thoughts on “Symbiosis

  1. Life is cycle after cycle. Reassuring.


  2. You paint a beautiful picture here Denise..I see an early summer’s day, a young boy or girl with an open and absorbing mind, reading for as long as the light lasts. Thereby creating a memory of childhood that they will carry forever. Thanks for the vision.


  3. great post Denise.. Life’s Circle of Eternity…what a lovely way to think of it


  4. Life’s circle of eternity.. 🙂


  5. A nice poem, full of peace and acceptance.


  6. The quick nourished by the dead – Yes, never thought of it that way but we certainly are the products of every one before us and they can nourish us in many ways and poetry is just one of them .


  7. Lovely poem, adee. What a gift you have.


  8. How I love ‘the elbow of its crook’. Beautiful!


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