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Waiting for God



In varying phases of readiness
Waiting for God

Adventurers and explorers
At different stages assorted ages
Waiting for God

Retired from this earth
Going to a new birth
Waiting for God

Leaving on a ghost train
Through the tunnel of love
Waiting for God

Travelling down the dark path
Into the bright light
Waiting for God

Diverse faiths some without
Some are weak others stout
Waiting for God


©Denise G Allen, 16 January 2013 03:43

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

15 thoughts on “Waiting for God

  1. ha i rather like the leaving on a ghost train stanza….ugh…waiting on god is a tough subject for me… i believe…i struggle with wanting my own timing though at times…smiles.


  2. And He most assuredly is waiting for us.. Beautiful poem and striking visuals..


  3. Really wonderful poem adee…


  4. Going to a new birth… It will be heavenly.
    Blessings ~ Maxi


  5. We are all in there somewhere, Denise.
    Shrewd poem, a pleasure to read


  6. So live each day as though it’s your last Because the world could blow up with one big blast!


  7. We are all waiting on something aren’t we?


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