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Out and About



Jack and Mrs Sprat

Thin and very fat

Took a stroll around the town

Looking at the sights

Never dreaming they were one

To other passers-by

Admiring the lights

Mirrored in the glass

Imagining they fit right in

‘Cos there are many fat-cats

Greed will take its toll

Now fancy that


©Denise G Allen, 21 January 2013 08:23

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

6 thoughts on “Out and About

  1. ha. fun spin (with a point) on the old nursery rhyme…..yes, true that….


  2. I love this bit of fun, adee. 🙂


  3. What a wonderful addition to this childhood rhyme.


  4. I was a little disappointed in the way it turned out, Jeannie. 😦


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