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I write what I feel…

Line of Fire



He feels bigger behind the trigger,

Full of power, no need to cower,

Teach them a lesson:

You will see you can’t mess with me,

I can’t help it if I’m not like you.

He raises the weapon…


©Denise G Allen, 08 March 2013 07:18

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

18 thoughts on “Line of Fire

  1. Very powerful writing, adee.


    • Teens don’t always know where to go for help – or even that they CAN be helped. They become desperate. This will end in tragedy one way or the other.


  2. The power of having a false sense of immortality…


  3. Ain’t that the sad truth, Adee? Well said.


  4. ugh….and what has got us to this point? there is always a story…who took his power? and are they the ones that will now see it?


  5. Or she raises the weapon to save herself from…
    blessings ~ maxi


  6. In just a few lines you give us so much


  7. Guns + Kids = NOT perfect together.


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