.
He feels bigger behind the trigger,
Full of power, no need to cower,
Teach them a lesson:
You will see you can’t mess with me,
I can’t help it if I’m not like you.
He raises the weapon…
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©Denise G Allen, 08 March 2013 07:18
Line of Fire
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08/03/2013 at 7:32 am
Very powerful writing, adee.
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08/03/2013 at 4:34 pm
Teens don’t always know where to go for help – or even that they CAN be helped. They become desperate. This will end in tragedy one way or the other.
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08/03/2013 at 8:49 am
The power of having a false sense of immortality…
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08/03/2013 at 4:35 pm
One way or the other, he needs to escape the bullying…
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08/03/2013 at 12:26 pm
Ain’t that the sad truth, Adee? Well said.
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08/03/2013 at 4:36 pm
Teens feel it when they dont fit in and are bullied, BB, and it happens far too often.
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08/03/2013 at 1:20 pm
ugh….and what has got us to this point? there is always a story…who took his power? and are they the ones that will now see it?
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08/03/2013 at 4:39 pm
Bullied, pushed into a corner, desperate to escape… the only question is, ‘Who is in the line of fire?’
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08/03/2013 at 1:33 pm
Or she raises the weapon to save herself from…
blessings ~ maxi
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08/03/2013 at 4:41 pm
Desperate measures, Maxi. Will he/she shoot him/herself or the bullies? Either will end in escape…
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09/03/2013 at 2:01 pm
In just a few lines you give us so much
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09/03/2013 at 6:35 pm
It’s so sad all round, Sidey!
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10/03/2013 at 5:00 am
Guns + Kids = NOT perfect together.
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10/03/2013 at 8:47 am
Especially when they can be so emotional!
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10/03/2013 at 9:06 pm
Kids of any age, actually. Gun ownership needs a very serious and responsible outlook.
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11/03/2013 at 5:26 am
Oh, yes, Col, you are so right!
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14/03/2013 at 12:57 pm
Whole nations … 😦
http://bennaga.wordpress.com/2013/03/11/western-hero/
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15/03/2013 at 4:24 am
Oh, yes, Ben, wars too! 😦
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