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Knock Knock

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Knock knock who’s there

No riposte

Break the house

Remove the roof

Any-body home

Too soon

Un(in)formed mass

Upper class Grade A

Scrambled or fried, she cried

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©Denise G Allen, 28 March 2013 18:20

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

11 thoughts on “Knock Knock

  1. It took me a minute, but then I got it. Cute!

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  2. Having trouble with this one.. am I just stupid ?? but I liked it just the same… if it’s from you it has to be good…

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  3. haha….much fun in this one adee….
    shall i bring the bacon and we can have a full breakfast?
    smiles.

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  4. It took me a second read through too, but it’s very cute! Love your imagination!

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  5. This took me a little while, Denise.
    I think I found the idea of “empty house” a little disconcerting when applied to the human brain.
    But so well constructed. Thank you
    John

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