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Copy Cats (a rap poem)



Copy cats emulate
dancing jubilation
holding you in high regard
showing approbation
idolise, venerate
muddy feet of clay
confusticate your nemesis
a favour to repay
exposed at last
disclosed, unmasked
trapped like a rat
living on the fat
dripping off the roast
and having the most
power in the land
or so we understand…

ยฉDenise G Allen, 10 May 2013 06:50

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals โ€“ sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

20 thoughts on “Copy Cats (a rap poem)

  1. It is definitely a rap


    • Yay! Thank you Nic! I really like the rhythm, but the subject matter has to also suit it, hey? I think it may sound ridiculous to rap a romantic subject, haha. ๐Ÿ™‚


  2. YES!! That’s so dope!! Adeeyoyo, gettin’ her flow on ๐Ÿ˜› awesome


  3. Aha, having the most powerโ€ฆ
    blessings ~ maxi


  4. i dunno i have heard some romantic raps, its all in the beat you put behind it…most raps have a very aggressive just have to slow it down…

    but it def fits the political you know…ha… fav part…

    disclosed, unmasked
    trapped like a rat
    living on the fat
    dripping off the roast


  5. First time I have seen you doing rap…I like!


  6. awesome! Would love to hear it against sum funky beats.


  7. Rap-turous! ๐Ÿ™‚
    You are into clayey feet lately! (Today was the right weather for it, here!)


  8. Denise, my mind is going through summersaults, trying to imagine you singing with a reversed golf cap, and all the street dancing!
    Nicely done, Denise.


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