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Copy Cats (a rap poem)

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Copy cats emulate
dancing jubilation
holding you in high regard
showing approbation
idolise, venerate
muddy feet of clay
confusticate your nemesis
a favour to repay
exposed at last
disclosed, unmasked
trapped like a rat
living on the fat
dripping off the roast
and having the most
power in the land
or so we understand…

ยฉDenise G Allen, 10 May 2013 06:50

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals โ€“ sometimes more than people!

20 thoughts on “Copy Cats (a rap poem)

  1. It is definitely a rap

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    • Yay! Thank you Nic! I really like the rhythm, but the subject matter has to also suit it, hey? I think it may sound ridiculous to rap a romantic subject, haha. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. YES!! That’s so dope!! Adeeyoyo, gettin’ her flow on ๐Ÿ˜› awesome

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  3. Aha, having the most powerโ€ฆ
    blessings ~ maxi

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  4. i dunno i have heard some romantic raps, its all in the beat you put behind it…most raps have a very aggressive beat..you just have to slow it down…

    but it def fits the political you know…ha…nice..my fav part…

    disclosed, unmasked
    trapped like a rat
    living on the fat
    dripping off the roast

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  5. First time I have seen you doing rap…I like!

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  6. awesome! Would love to hear it against sum funky beats.

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  7. Rap-turous! ๐Ÿ™‚
    You are into clayey feet lately! (Today was the right weather for it, here!)

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  8. Denise, my mind is going through summersaults, trying to imagine you singing with a reversed golf cap, and all the street dancing!
    Nicely done, Denise.
    John

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