.
Copy cats emulate
dancing jubilation
holding you in high regard
showing approbation
idolise, venerate
muddy feet of clay
confusticate your nemesis
a favour to repay
exposed at last
disclosed, unmasked
trapped like a rat
living on the fat
dripping off the roast
and having the most
power in the land
or so we understand…
©Denise G Allen, 10 May 2013 06:50
Adeeyoyo's Blog 
11/05/2013 at 8:43 am
It is definitely a rap
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11/05/2013 at 8:46 am
Yay! Thank you Nic! I really like the rhythm, but the subject matter has to also suit it, hey? I think it may sound ridiculous to rap a romantic subject, haha. 🙂
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11/05/2013 at 8:52 am
YES!! That’s so dope!! Adeeyoyo, gettin’ her flow on 😛 awesome
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11/05/2013 at 8:58 am
RATFLMAO 😀
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11/05/2013 at 7:26 pm
do you happen to have skype adeeyoyo?? 🙂
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11/05/2013 at 7:44 pm
Yes, Kieran, but I would rather you emailed me ‘cos my Skype is quite busy sometimes. 🙂
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11/05/2013 at 11:30 am
Aha, having the most power…
blessings ~ maxi
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11/05/2013 at 1:23 pm
Gone to his head, I fear… 😦
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11/05/2013 at 1:41 pm
i dunno i have heard some romantic raps, its all in the beat you put behind it…most raps have a very aggressive beat..you just have to slow it down…
but it def fits the political you know…ha…nice..my fav part…
disclosed, unmasked
trapped like a rat
living on the fat
dripping off the roast
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11/05/2013 at 2:04 pm
My favourite few lines too, Brian. Just have to wait and see what happens now, beat-wise…
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11/05/2013 at 2:26 pm
First time I have seen you doing rap…I like!
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11/05/2013 at 2:51 pm
Oy, thanks Gran! I do too, and hope I can do more and varied… just have to wait and see what comes… 🙂
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11/05/2013 at 6:18 pm
awesome! Would love to hear it against sum funky beats.
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11/05/2013 at 6:28 pm
Thanks for the visit and comment, DKP. 🙂
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11/05/2013 at 6:51 pm
Rap-turous! 🙂
You are into clayey feet lately! (Today was the right weather for it, here!)
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11/05/2013 at 7:09 pm
Ah, thank you so much, Col. 😀
I noticed the ‘feet of clay’, but could not change it, lol! You’re the first to mention it. Bit of rain here in the early, early morning. Dried by the time the sun came up.
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11/05/2013 at 8:12 pm
No harm in repeating a good theme!
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11/05/2013 at 8:22 pm
I was just thinking that, Col, but in more ways than one, lol! Wait and see – just hope it works…
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11/05/2013 at 10:24 pm
Denise, my mind is going through summersaults, trying to imagine you singing with a reversed golf cap, and all the street dancing!
Nicely done, Denise.
John
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12/05/2013 at 6:12 am
[giggles] Thanks John… wish I could though… maybe my second childhood is catching up with me, lol. 🙂
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