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I write what I feel…




Confined ]inasmallplace[ slip and slither,

Try to outdo one another,

Up and over often becomes down and under

As they jiggle around for (elbow?) space. Ha.

They seem to take on lives of their own,

Each one for himself…?

Hard to catch, great escapees,

Like so many souls clustered together

Only to ‘Pop’, released to the atmosphere,

Released to God’s care,

Bright as light…


©Denise G Allen, 29 May 2013 06:37

Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people! I am back after a break. Thanks for still being here, if you are! Missed you! xxx

12 thoughts on “Bubbles

  1. The second word is baffling me …


  2. Beautiful descriptive poem, adee.


  3. Very descriptive!
    Some just failed to get a grip,
    And remained a little drip?


  4. fun play in your words…you def capture the feel of bubbles…its fun to see those rogue bubbles that break free and dare to ride the winds high as they can before….POP


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