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SANITY

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(After watching The Aviator…)

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Am I sane…
because i say so,
or you…
who do not know
…me?

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If only life were as neat

as the closing chapters in a book,

but entrails creep,

seep through scars unhealed,

carry forth unfinished mortal wounds

which stain the lenses of my eyes

to colour my vision

and only You can heal my sight ~

make me fit to fight

for what is right.

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©Denise G Allen, 06 June 2013 05:57

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

24 thoughts on “SANITY

  1. Good morning, early bird! I haven’t seen the Aviator. Sounds like a sad movie.

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    • Good morning, Pussycat! It was a sad movie. There is such a fine line between genius and madness and it really make one think… Remember the movie ‘A Beautiful Mind’ – absolutely outstanding!

      I only mentioned The Aviator because it triggered this poem, but one does not have to see the movie to understand the poem.

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  2. Having seen the Aviator.. I get the words you’ve penned… good one…

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  3. But to know the wounds exist, and to accept myself, wounded
    And to know my own weakness, and to ask Your help
    This is sanity!

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  4. good movie/great poem.

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  5. I must see this movie in order to understand your poem, adee. It sounds quite disturbing.

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  6. I have not seen the movie yet either, but will make a point of doing so 🙂

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  7. I am another who lacks the perspective of the movie …
    Even without that, the words make challenging statements.

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    • The two movies, The Aviator and A Beautiful Mind, are wonderful in portraying the ‘overload’ of one’s mind… but not necessary to see in order to understand the poem, Col.

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  8. I’m with John …to know the wound exists and to accept myself.”
    blessings to you, Denise ~ maxi

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  9. who is to judge sanity…our wounds…we carry those for sure and they can color our lives in good ways and bad…been a while since i watched that one…

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