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Dreams

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If you watch me or follow

you will find i hide my hopes

and dreams under my pillow

my wishes and fancies are

buried there together with

a feather that fell through the air

white marshmallow clouds

form my bed, soft and welcoming

me into the warm folds of faith

where I lie way up high…

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ยฉDenise G Allen, 14 June 2013 05:42

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals โ€“ sometimes more than people!

18 thoughts on “Dreams

  1. This is really lovely, adee. (Who keeps giving you one star?) ๐Ÿ˜•

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    • Thanks, AD! I can assure you it wasn’t me, lol! ๐Ÿ˜€ (PS – I have given myself a ‘like’ by mistake TWICE when I clicked in the wrong place to see the hidden ones, lol!)

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      • Me too, and then I got this message from WordPress “You’re so vain.” ๐Ÿ˜€ Anyway, I only give 5*, or not at all.

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        • Yes, I also got the ‘You’re so vain’ and blushed! I have always thought you could give only one star (at a time). I have gone back now and then and added another one, but it sometimes refuses to take it. So I sometimes get away with giving 2 stars tops.

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  2. I loved this… really enjoyed it… (and I gave you 5 stars)

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  3. lovely!!

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  4. Hey, you dere in da cloud, wotcher smokin’, mon? ๐Ÿ™‚
    The feather is a nice (light ๐Ÿ™‚ ) touch.

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  5. This is really lovely, adee.

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  6. nice, soft and lovely verse adee…
    i keep my head in the clouds and feet on the ground…smiles.

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  7. You are being an inspiration again, Denise. ๐Ÿ™‚ …

    PUSILLANIMITY

    I don’t hoard any furtive hopes
    Beneath my cosy feather pillow
    Nor dreams, nor wistful wishes
    For fear they will make it lumpy
    And give me a pain in the neck

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  8. After reading your post, I climbed right up there and floated around on a marshmallow cloud. ๐Ÿ™‚

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