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If you watch me or follow
you will find i hide my hopes
and dreams under my pillow
my wishes and fancies are
buried there together with
a feather that fell through the air
white marshmallow clouds
form my bed, soft and welcoming
me into the warm folds of faith
where I lie way up high…
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©Denise G Allen, 14 June 2013 05:42
Adeeyoyo's Blog 
14/06/2013 at 9:50 am
This is really lovely, adee. (Who keeps giving you one star?) 😕
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14/06/2013 at 10:11 am
Thanks, AD! I can assure you it wasn’t me, lol! 😀 (PS – I have given myself a ‘like’ by mistake TWICE when I clicked in the wrong place to see the hidden ones, lol!)
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14/06/2013 at 10:22 am
Me too, and then I got this message from WordPress “You’re so vain.” 😀 Anyway, I only give 5*, or not at all.
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14/06/2013 at 10:40 am
Yes, I also got the ‘You’re so vain’ and blushed! I have always thought you could give only one star (at a time). I have gone back now and then and added another one, but it sometimes refuses to take it. So I sometimes get away with giving 2 stars tops.
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14/06/2013 at 10:18 am
I loved this… really enjoyed it… (and I gave you 5 stars)
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14/06/2013 at 10:41 am
Well, thank you kind sir! 😀 But the mystery deepens…
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14/06/2013 at 10:34 am
lovely!!
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14/06/2013 at 10:42 am
Wow, how nice to see you again ~ it’s been quite a long time. ♥
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14/06/2013 at 11:07 am
Hey, you dere in da cloud, wotcher smokin’, mon? 🙂
The feather is a nice (light 🙂 ) touch.
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14/06/2013 at 11:20 am
Bwahahaha, Col! Actually the feather dropped (figuratively speaking, lol)) into my head as I wrote.
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14/06/2013 at 12:49 pm
This is really lovely, adee.
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14/06/2013 at 6:32 pm
Thank you so much, Hope. 🙂
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14/06/2013 at 1:32 pm
nice, soft and lovely verse adee…
i keep my head in the clouds and feet on the ground…smiles.
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14/06/2013 at 6:35 pm
Thanks, Brian, for a lovely comment. My feet belong on the ground and I have no head for heights! 😉
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14/06/2013 at 1:38 pm
You are being an inspiration again, Denise. 🙂 …
PUSILLANIMITY
I don’t hoard any furtive hopes
Beneath my cosy feather pillow
Nor dreams, nor wistful wishes
For fear they will make it lumpy
And give me a pain in the neck
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14/06/2013 at 6:37 pm
Hahaha, Ben, I LOVE the result of my inspiration! ::D
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14/06/2013 at 2:32 pm
After reading your post, I climbed right up there and floated around on a marshmallow cloud. 🙂
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14/06/2013 at 6:39 pm
…and isn’t it lovely to escape for a while, Jeanne? ♥
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