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Struggle

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Earth –

Beautiful flower of the universe

A veritable Garden of Eden

Poison ivy slithers in the undergrowth

Profuse and suffocating

A struggle to take breath

To hold onto life

Until death

Retaliation and vengeance

Will not save my soul

Only acceptance will keep me whole

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©Denise G Allen, 11 July 2013 06:55

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Author: adeeyoyo

I am a middle-aged South African woman, living in Johannesburg. I began writing poetry towards the end of May 2010. I love animals – sometimes more than people!

17 thoughts on “Struggle

  1. Brilliant… love it all 🙂

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  2. Outstanding… enjoyed this…

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  3. Oh Denise, I had a mighty battle with Poison Ivy twenty-six years ago when David and I bought the property to build our home. I am very allergic and the ivy was up the trees, underground, everywhere. I nearly ended up in the hospital.
    blessings ~ maxi

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  4. ah the grit under the beauty, the posion ivy that threatens to choke out the beauty….lot of wisdom in that last line as well…

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  5. So right, Denise… acceptance is key

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  6. This is a good one, adee, and so true.

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  7. Astute – poetically and practically.

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